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Heather - Dif. Style by HezuNeutral Heather - Dif. Style by HezuNeutral
wow.
XD half of me says 'meh' and half of me says 'HOLY SHIZ'!

I can't believe I drew that!

I was listening to this song when I drew it- [link]

well, here is Heather in a different kind of style. o3o
I LOVE trying drawing in different styles.
that way I can find out which style I like most and draw that way.

>w< I am proud!
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:iconcoolguy1000:
coolguy1000 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2011
i still think this is the greatest Piece of art i have ever seen in my entire life.............

holy cow Heather........
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HezuNeutral Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2011
xD you've commented on this 3 times now!!
bu thank you~~!
if you keep talking about it I might just want to make one for you xD
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coolguy1000 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2011
im actually Pretty tempted :aww: XD

you are to good for your own good heather!

Such talent!
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HezuNeutral Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2011
:iconretardthinkingplz: uh..... being too good for my own good is a bad thing...
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:iconcoolguy1000:
coolguy1000 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2011
DAMN YOU! XD

Well you get my point!

Your an amazing artist!!!

(and please tell me you saw the Chapter one i posted)
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:iconhezuneutral:
HezuNeutral Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2011
xD you can be amazing too!


xD and yes, I saw chapter one~!
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coolguy1000 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2011
Lies!

good!
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:iconhezuneutral:
HezuNeutral Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2011
T3T LIES?
YOU KIDDING?
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BlueRoseswithThorns Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2011  Student General Artist
Oh god, must... fave..... NOW!!
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:iconhezuneutral:
HezuNeutral Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2011
>w<
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ArtGirl615 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
WOAH! Dis... ish... awesome O.O
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HezuNeutral Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2011
thank you! >w<
I tried my best!

y'know... people tell me drawing takes great practice and you can't just get better at drawing just by a snap of your fingers, but for me, I can. o3o
I guess I just have an understanding of real life objects and 2d/3d type of stuff.
but I still can't figure out how to draw humans in 3D.
I'll have to work on that. o3o
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ArtGirl615 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Pfft... lucky OAO I think thats good that you can improve quickly! But for me I like to practice practice practice .3. It's actually fun whatching my self improve!But upsetting when I just can't seem to get it right :iconwhatdaplz:
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HezuNeutral Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2011
yeah...
I'm used to doing things fast, because if I start getting slow, I get bored with what I'm doing and I don't finish it. (that goes for when I'm eating too)

plus, Sonic was my biggest inspiration ever XD
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AngelChaoSakura Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2011
{applauds}
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Apricotthevixen Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2011  Student Digital Artist
*clapclapclapclap*
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animekat12 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011
dude
this
is
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BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!
SQUEE! i love how her eyes came out 8D and her dress, and her hair, and the shading
and everything about it >3<
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HezuNeutral Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011
>w< thank you so so much!
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animekat12 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011
yw <3
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DemonicPlant Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
awsome she look pretty and the way you did the flowers is amazing 10/10
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HezuNeutral Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011
thank you so much! >w<
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DemonicPlant Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
no prob
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The-Chosen-Wolf Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011  Student General Artist
Hearther- The shading of this looks beautiful, and background has a lot of wonderful details it it. :3 I'm really proud of your improvements. .w.

Here's some tips if you're seriously thinking of trying to make your own Anime style. .w.

If you're going to be doing a 3/4 view (such as this), the left eye shouldn't be touching the outline of the face.
The reason behind this is because the outline of the face is supposed to show a bit of the eye socket and the brow bone. This gives the face a bit of deepth, even without shading.
Having the eye touch the outline of the face makes the eye look like it's bludging out of the person's head, sort of like bug eyes (And Heather doesn't have bug eyes- We all know this). :U

The top part of the head, starting from the bottom of the brow bone, seems to be coming out a bit too far. You want the brow bone and cheek bone to line up as much as possible.
If you study an actual person's face, you'll see that the brow bone and cheek bone usually are close to lining up.

The top of Heather's hair seems to be a little flat. Most common Anime styles result to having the top of the hair being fluffier than the rest of the hair (the only time this is not true is when the hair is being lifted, pulled, blowung in the wind, ect.).
This is to give the hair more volume. Having the top of the hair too flat makes the character's hair either look dirty (because dirty hair tends to lay flat when it's not knotted or tangled), or look extremely thin.

The face seems to be rsting a bit too high on the head. When drawing the head in the sketch (plerase note that there should be no hair on your figure's head while trying to do the placement of the face), the face should take up about half of the figure's head. The eyebrows are the only thing that should be a little over the 'half-way' mark on the face.

The nose is a bit too high. The middle of the nose (from the bottom of the nose to the tip of the nose- NOT the top) should be almost lined up with the cheek bone.
Also, the nose seems to be a pointed too much. An actual human's nose is a little rounded. (Most Anime's that have pointed noses as such are Animes that usually don't focus on detail. Animes that don't focus on detail are usual your basic 'SHIT TON OF ACTION AND GORE, YYYEEAAAHHHH' kinds of Animes. For a picture like this, you'll want to resort to the kinds of Animes that focus more on detail).

Even though Anime is known for having extremely huge eyes, there is such a point as 'WAY too big eyes'. You might want to make the eyes a bit smaller next time. If you look closely, Heather's eyes go past the brow bone. This makes her look exetremely akward, and almost makes her look like an alien (don't take offence to that, please. D; </3).

Also, the ear is placed too high up.
The bottom of the ear should be lined up with the bottom of the nose, while the top of the ear should be lined up with the middle area of the eye.

Also, the breasts seems to be too high up, and a bit too small for the more 'pointed-ish' style that you're going for.

Don't worry too much about these small details though. Keep practicing and these small details will start correcting theselves. ;D

(If you don't understand anything that I'm talking about, let me know, and I'll do a red-line for you to show you what I'm talking about. :U)

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK, HEATHER~! 8'D :heart:
MILEZ LOVES YOU MUCH~! :rose:
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HezuNeutral Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011
XD whoa...
you didn't have to go writing an essay about it!
well, Heather is kinda alien, XD but I see what you're going for.
Im still new to the whole anime-human thing, so I guess I'll have to keep working on it then XD ( the ear thing I'm definitely working on.. I've noticed that it's too high too and I've been trying to fix it for weeks now, but my hand is just too stubborn >.<)

thank you!
I loves you so much too!!! >w<
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The-Chosen-Wolf Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011  Student General Artist
Hurrhurr.
I didn't even realize how much I was writing, or how long it was- until I hit the 'send' button. ;w; :heart:

:'D
Just a fellow Anime artist trying to help another~!
-clings to your head- owo <3
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HezuNeutral Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011
XD
*hugs*
it's okay, it's nice to have you talk to me!
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The-Chosen-Wolf Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011  Student General Artist
:'D
I LOVE talking to you, Heather!
I just never know what to talk to you about. ;^; </3
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HezuNeutral Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011
XD oh gosh... really?
I can't talk to my grandpa.
it's just total silence.

It's so weird XD

we'll... what should we talk about?
maybe we can start with that simple boring question..?
like... "how is the weather today"? :meow:
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The-Chosen-Wolf Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2011  Student General Artist
The weather- Is RAINY. 8'D -loves rain-
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HezuNeutral Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2011
rain is cool too! >w<
but I hate mist-rain... D:
where it isn't exactly rain, but yet it is, and it comes in waves at weird times and it gets everything soaked.
I don't know why, but I just like the actual drops of rain instead of 'sneaky rain'!
but its sunny here right now, so I shouldn't be complaining XD
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Wolimaru Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011
o.e
Wow... has to be the best you've done! :D
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:iconhezuneutral:
HezuNeutral Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011
really? thanks so much! >w<
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KirliaMaster77 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011   General Artist
Wow! That is really good! I see you're getting even better at drawing!
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HezuNeutral Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011
thanks~ X3
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KirliaMaster77 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011   General Artist
You're welcome!
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FirePrincess917 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011
:O_o: ............. *dies from sheer awesomeness*
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:iconhezuneutral:
HezuNeutral Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011
*revives you* D:
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FirePrincess917 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011
:XD:
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CottonCandyAri123 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
COMPLECTLY TOTALLY AMAZING !!!! *FAVS THE PIC*
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HezuNeutral Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011
thank you! >W<
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CottonCandyAri123 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
no prob :3
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QueenJessika Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011
wow just wow thats all I have to say :D
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:iconhezuneutral:
HezuNeutral Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011
thank you! >w<
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CookiesNLazars Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is AMAZING!! :D Automatic fav! :D
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HezuNeutral Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011
thank you! >w<
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ScarabDynasty1 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I like that you're trying other styles. I especially like the use of the little hair decor in place of her flower growths (darn it, I STILL say seedrian's hair is made out of petals and/leaves, not hair strands, but that's just me :XD:). *boogies down to that song*

First, a warning. Don't try to draw other PEOPLE'S styles to find out what works best for you. That's not really how it works. Work on your OWN style, be it inspired by someone elses or unique as you can get. It won't happen overnight and it takes a lot of work but I know you're no stranger to that ;) My own style is still very slowly developing and I'm like, a decade older than you, so don't worry about finding your best way of drawing RIGHT NOW. You'll get there :heart:

Now, for the ACTUAL concrit: I don't think those eyes work very well in this face. They're too large. I can see you're going for the anime style there (Moe?) but it's like you're trying two different styles in one face; you haven't really perfected how those eyes would work and how they would be shaped in her face, they're just stuck on her face like sticking plasters (sorry if that doesn't make sense I'll try and explain better if you need me to).

The nose needs more defintion, it's just a dot here which can be a style, true, but doesn't really work with the rest of this. Nice collarbone and the neck goes to the head well. The shading needs to be smoother, and sometimes you have shading in the wrong place (why is there shading on her nearest upper arm, where the light hit? That should be a highlight. You need to pick which direction the light is coming from and stick to it. Remember shadows happen wherever the light doens't touch)

Have you considered working on an entirely different style for her? Something that's not anime inspired? It's best that you start learning your own style. Anime skills are great to have and a lovely way to draw, but calling anime a 'style' isn't really accurate, because there are lots of different ways in which anime is drawn: if, for example, Sonic X is the anime style, does that mean Akira isn't because it's completely differently drawn? No, they're both still anime. So how can anime be a style?). Anime is more of a medium than a style, and I'm not even sure MEDIUM is the right thing to call it eithet. S'confusin' man :faint:
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HezuNeutral Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2011
XD thank you.
yeah. whenever I draw something that isn't my style, I somehow feel bad because I feel like I'm posting something that isn't mine but yet it is.....
XD I need to back down on the eyes too... when I first tried drawing them small, they messed up so I should practice on them more.
I have trouble with the lighting too, I try to remind myself where the lighting is, but my hand is stubborn. -3-;;

"Remember shadows happen wherever the light doesn't touch" --
that sounds like a good line in a movie or something XD !!

I don't think I have tried a different style than anime.
maybe I should sometime....

XD that is very true though.
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ScarabDynasty1 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You should DEFINITELY woork in a style other than anime :nod:; there's no 'maybe' about it. In fact, I'd go so far as to say it's ESSENTIAL that you do. I demonstrate THIS comic as a better exmaple of why than I could ever explain (read the description as well, it's a very good bit of logic) : [link]

"Remember shadows happen wherever the light doesn't touch" --
that sounds like a good line in a movie or something XD !!


Hmmm yeah it DOES doesn't it? *is now thinking pondering thoughts* :devil:
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HezuNeutral Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2011
XD well, I was saying 'maybe' because I haven't looked at too many different styles of things, so I'd have to do some research to look all the different types of art! (I'm sure there are thousands, but still XD)
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ScarabDynasty1 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So many I'm not even sure we can catagorise them :XD: Animes not a style that's for sure... I have n ideaWHAT it is O_o

Exploring them all and being inspired by them is great though. I don't think searching through them, finding a specific one and learning to mimic it will help in the long run. That's what that cartoon is about, I mean he learned to do it perfectly and then ended up in a rut as a result. Nuthin' worse than a rut. They're sticky things :/
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